Two Very Short Poems Made by Yours Truly
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Body and Soul
by Teresita Blanco
Behind this mask
Only millions of dark
Desires sprout and devour,
Yet one can only suppress the hour.
A hollow sky has risen
Night has become my prison.
Day is gone forever.
Strangely one’s will to live grows stronger.
One begins to feel the will to muster
Ultimate strength and death’s Power
Leaving the soul behind, they grow fouler.
White Hole
by Teresita Blanco
We must all
Have to fall
In darkness
To become brightness
Even if we move forth
Hope ,in the end, leaves
Others too, became lifeless,
Lay down your pride!
Eat the fruit your torment!
Editors Note: The thing about these two poems are the first letters of each line. I started experimenting with the simple format of having the first letters match the title. This kiddy grade format is useful for people whose muse is underdeveloped. However, if any self respecting poet should avoid them. However, for exercise purposes, this format works wonders. In any case, the revised versions are 5 star worthy. Hehehehe... I am hungry!!!
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Description: Two Super Depressing Poems • About: These poems are about me and my struggle • Accountable Person: Fernando Blanco • Author: Teresita Blanco • Awards: None • Content Location: poems • Content Rating: 5 • Contributor: Fernando Blanco • Copyright Holder: Teresita Blanco • Copyright Year: 2012 • Creator: Teresita Blanco • Editor: Fernando Blanco • Genre: Sad • Headline: Two Very Short Poems Made by Yours Truly • Keywords: body, death, format, foul, ghost, good review, grow, mask, poems, Power, reborn, short blog, spirit, strength, teresita blanco, torment, white hole, writing, • Mentions: Three Moons • Provider: Me • Publisher: Phi Stars • Publishing Principles: Teresita Blanco • Source Organization: Phi Stars • Version: 7 • Item Reviewed: Poems • Review Rating: 5 •